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Dash & Lily meets Ferris Bueller's Day Off in Edward Underhill's new whirlwind rom-com about two queer teens who spend one life-changing day together in New York City. Abby Akerman believes in the Universe. After all, her Midwest high school marching band is about to perform in the Macy’s Thanksgiving Day Parade in New York City—if that’s not proof that magical things can happen, what is? New York also happens to be the setting of her favorite romance novel, making it the perfect place for Abby to finally tell her best friend Kat that she’s in love with her (and, um, gay). She’s carefully annotated a copy of the book as a gift for Kat, and she’s counting on the Universe to provide an Epic Scene worthy of her own rom-com. Leo Brewer, on the other hand, just wants to get through this trip without falling apart. He doesn’t believe the Universe is magical at all, mostly because he’s about to be outed to his very Southern extended family on national TV as the trans boy he really is. He’s not excited for the parade, and he’s even less excited for an entire day of sightseeing with his band. But the Universe has other ideas. When fate throws Abby and Leo together on the wrong subway train, they soon find themselves lost in the middle of Manhattan. Even worse, Leo accidentally causes Abby to lose her Epic Gift for Kat. So to salvage the day, they come up with a new mission: find a souvenir from every location mentioned in the book for Abby to give Kat instead. But as Leo and Abby traverse the city, from the streets of Chinatown to the halls of Grand Central Station and the top of the Empire State Building, their initial expectations for the trip—and of each other—begin to shift. Maybe, if they let it, this could be the day that changes everything, for both of them.
Publication Year: 2024
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~~Thank you to NetGalley and St. Martin's Press for the ARC!~~
So, to be completely transparent, I only got this ARC because it was up for grabs on NetGalley. I did not like Underhill's debut, whatsoever, but I have read sophomore books and liked them. I figured I'd have another go-around and hoped I'd like this one.
You see my rating. I obviously didn't.
One thing I will say is that I liked that it wasn't instalove. Abby and Leo's first convo was awkward and weird, reflecting what I would feel was the realistic reaction anyone would have if they got lost with a stranger. But the story is suppose to be about strangers connecting and falling in love, and yet all I saw while reading was the lack of genuine chemistry between our leads. If anything, I either found them both annoying at best or boring at worst; the grumpy/sunshine dynamic taken to the extreme always irritates me. I had to skim near the end because I was just so done being with these characters.
The story also suffers because of the lackluster romance. I'm normally fine with two characters doing nothing but talking and exploring the setting, as long as they're both charming and interesting, of course. Without that, the story just drags and it isn't fun, anymore. The side characters were bland, too, their main elements essentially boiled down to distractors and cheerleaders for the leads to finally get together. The one part with side characters I liked the most was when Abby and Leo wet book hunting with a queer club. I would rather have read a book about the club than what is shown in the book.
Again, Underhill's writing is just fine but nothing exciting. I completely forgot the author has music degrees, because, again, the main character(s) can play music (Leo on snare and Abby with clarinet). The music playing scenes were a little better this time around, but I still found it boring.
Overall, this was just meh. I think I won't be reading anymore of Underhill's work, even if their ARCs are free to grab on NetGalley.
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