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For now, I don't quite like the main character but I really curious about the hotel 👀

I'm really enjoying the early copy of this, though there are times where the characters seem a little too juvenile for their ages. I then also have to remind myself that it's a bunch of guys and men don't mature fast.

It's an interesting start, but the writing style is kinda annoying me, making it harder to get into I understand, it looks like it's trying to be a sort of journal, but it all sounds so disjointed, very hard to fall into a flow

I find myself rearranging the sentences, going "wouldn't it flow better like this?"lol

My brain feels dirty and not in the sexy way. I need a serious cleansing. A detox if you will. Is there a camp somewhere for that? 🏕️