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After his family’s matchmaking extravaganza at Thanksgiving, high school teacher Zach Wong is terrified of what his parents might do for Chinese New Year. Surely they’ll try to set him up yet again, especially now that his older brothers are in relationships. Zach, however, has no interest in dating, not since his fiancée left him. The solution? Find a fake girlfriend to avoid his parents’ matchmaking. Jo MacGregor, the town dentist, is the obvious choice. They both live in Mosquito Bay and have been friends for years, ever since they bonded over broken engagements. A few kisses and dates around town, and everyone will believe they’re in a relationship. No problem. Except their fake relationship is starting to feel more and more real…
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3.5 stars
OVERALL: A cutesy and quick (but decently steamy!) novella involving friends fake dating, 'it's just sex,' and a particularly funny game of Pictionary. Nothing groundbreaking here, but an easy read and good relationship development in a novella.
Content warnings: sexually explicit scenes
My vlog on this book: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0-aYCKrgrQ
This was a cute quick story of two friends who have each had previous broken engagements pretending to date so the guy's family won't set him up on further (terrible) blind dates. Zach asks his friend Jo, who has been kind of pining after him for 2 years, and she is happy to say yes, and he thinks "wow, she's such a good actress, it's almost as if she has real feelings for me!"
I read this novella all in one sitting, and I thought the writing had good polish, if the overall tone was a bit Hallmark in its level of cheese and cliche. (But then there was decent steamy sex, so rated R Hallmark??) I liked this story and the characters, it was fun to read, but not going to stay with me I don't think. Probably would have liked it better had I read the previous two novellas in this series to be invested in this family and already be familiar with the members.
The Pictionary scene with the family was quite funny, and I was so pleased to have that scene in the book because I think it went a long way toward establishing connection between our main characters and even getting Zach's family to know and like Jo. My biggest frustrations with novellas are always that there's never enough development on page for me to believe that the 'I love you' was warranted, and a scene like this one really did a lot of that work. Along the same lines, I wish the end had been a more casual "I want to date you, I'm open to love now, you're amazing and have changed my mind on relationships" instead of the declarations of love that we got after a couple of weeks of fake dates and good sex.