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Siavahda

Picky about prose, obsessed with worldbuilding. AuADHD + fibromyalgia. I hear writing rhythm like you hear music; it's a problem. I read + review queer SFF at everybookadoorway.com!

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My Taste
Radiance
Darknesses (Darknesses, #1)
The Last Sun (The Tarot Sequence, #1)
Kushiel's Dart (Phèdre's Trilogy, #1)
The Mercy Makers
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Tea & Treachery at the Infinite Pantry
0%
Revenant Gun (The Machineries of Empire, #3)
53%
The Will to Battle (Terra Ignota #3)
61%
Bodies of Magic
50%
Misery's Wife
53%
The Red Sacrament
28%
Pasha the Storm
44%
A Dance of Burning Blades (Invoker Trilogy)
11%
The Cloak and Its Wizard: A modern fantasy full of monsters, magic, and snarky accessories
44%
The Persephone Effect (Gunmetal Olympus Book 3)
44%

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Thoughts Be Bloody

Thoughts Be Bloody

Auden Patrick

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Her Subtle Investigations (The Warrior's Guild, #3)

Her Subtle Investigations (The Warrior's Guild, #3)

Scarlett Gale

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Misery's Wife

Misery's Wife

Joan Tierney

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Revenant Gun (The Machineries of Empire, #3)

Revenant Gun (The Machineries of Empire, #3)

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Villain (Hench, #2)

Villain (Hench, #2)

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Chai and Charmcraft: A magical Middle Eastern cozy fantasy (The Charmcraft Chronicles Book 1)

Chai and Charmcraft: A magical Middle Eastern cozy fantasy (The Charmcraft Chronicles Book 1)

Lynn Strong

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  • Sister Wake
    Lazarus
    Mar 13, 2026
    4.5
    Enjoyment: 5.0Quality: 5.0Characters: 4.0Plot: 4.0

    This book is excellent. An Irish rage novel with Elden Ring monsters. A little dense in places but overall loved it

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  • Winter Tide (The Innsmouth Legacy, #1)
    Siavahda
    Apr 19, 2026
    4.5
    Enjoyment: 5.0Quality: 4.5Characters: 4.5Plot: 3.5
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    Ignore All Previous Instructions

    Ignore All Previous Instructions

    Ada Hoffmann

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    The Red Sacrament

    The Red Sacrament

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    The Will to Battle (Terra Ignota #3)

    The Will to Battle (Terra Ignota #3)

    Ada Palmer

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    All Hail Chaos (Time of Iron, #2)

    All Hail Chaos (Time of Iron, #2)

    Sarah Rees Brennan

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    Bodies of Magic

    Bodies of Magic

    Freya Marske

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  • A Viper Among Kings
    Siavahda
    Apr 17, 2026
    DNF
    2.0
    Enjoyment: 0.5Quality: 2.0Characters: 2.0Plot:

    I received this book for free from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

    Thanks, I hate it.

    This reads like bad YA: the language and sentence structure etc are really simple, it’s real big on tell-don’t-show, and the main character (who is centuries old) talks like an annoying modern teenager, complete with her rolling her eyes every other paragraph.

    Quotes taken from my review copy, so they may or may not be the same in the published edition come release day.

    “Was that so hard?”

    Nathan shook his head.

    “Exactly. Truth is easier than deceit, Nathan. You’ll be good to remember that.”

    He nodded.

    “Now, truthfully, I’m going to kill you.”

    I absolutely despise this kind of humor, and even moreso I hate the kind of people/ characters who think it’s funny. This was the moment I knew I was going to DNF, because I have no interest in following a protagonist like this.

    The writing is full of modernisms – ‘sex dungeon’, ‘you wish’, ‘tits’, etc – which I always hate in not-modern settings. There are wonky lines like

    pulling a playing card from the pocket of his colorfully patched jacket that depicted a monarch with the head of a raven.

    where the subject of the sentence isn’t clear (is the raven-headed monarch on the card or the jacket?) and idiocies like

    two people having a lovely night on top of a display table. And on that display table, groaning under their combined weight, was the shop’s only mirror.

    ‘caus sure, people would have sex on a mirror, no one would worry about it breaking under them and stabbing them with shards – never mind how expensive mirrors were in pre-modern settings, and that no one would risk breaking something that expensive.

    And don’t get me started about how boring the sentient magic is – there’s nothing strange or eldritch about it, it’s just a vicious little goblin, completely uninteresting.

    Thanks but no thanks, hard pass.

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    Pasha the Storm

    Pasha the Storm

    Linda H. Codega

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  • The Language of Liars
    Siavahda
    Apr 17, 2026
    DNF
    3.0
    Enjoyment: 2.0Quality: 3.5Characters: 3.0Plot: 3.0

    I made it to 51% and just do not want to read any more.

    The blurb is hugely misleading: the Star Eaters are enslaved, though no one calls it slavery and Ro doesn’t realise that’s what it is until he gets there. (And even then, does not realise that immediately.) The whole purpose of his species’ linguists program is not, in fact, to understand the Star Eaters better; it’s so that they can secretly steal/divert the precious material only Star Eaters can harvest. Ro is very much a starry-eyed linguist/anthropologist, but the set-up is not what the back of the book makes it sound like.

    It is indeed big on the linguistic angle, which I appreciated even when it went over my head; it feels genuine, and I am a total geek for worldbuilding, which alien linguistics obviously is. And none of the rest of the book feels badly written to me; the prose is good, the characters are convincing, and I am incredibly impressed by how wonderfully alien the Star Eaters are! (So few authors can pull off really alien-feeling aliens.) The growing sense of Something Wrong is building very convincingly; Ro’s growing unease about the situation is marvellous, and marvellously conveyed.

    On the other hand…I have no idea what any of the species in this book look like, which was maddening. The linguistics went over my head a lot, and nothing else about the plot was all that interesting to me. I’m a hugely sensory (is that the term?) reader, and without a lot of description I get lost and bored. I loved the moments when we got to experience the alien senses, senses humans don’t have, but other than that there wasn’t a lot here for me. The slavery set-up is naturally very bleak, but it’s also very dull, with a lot of repetition and nothing interesting to picture. Even the conversations Ro has with the Star Eaters tend to repeat a lot, the same mottos/mantras just echoing back and forth.

    This isn’t the story I thought I was getting; I thought we’d be seeing the Star Eaters in their natural environment/culture, and what we got instead just isn’t holding my attention. I think a lot of it’s objectively well-written, but I wish it had been a full novel instead, with more room to describe and explain things. As-is this just isn’t for me.

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