“Only a less civilized race would keep their seed sacks hanging out in the open”

I’ve gotta say, I cannot disagree here.

This was a random Hoopla borrow, and I’m not sorry I tried it.
I struggled with the plausibility at times, and the world-building felt, honestly, lazy, overall.
At times, the alien speaks as you might expect, and at other times he speaks like a total Earthling. There were many inconsistencies or semi-developed aspects such as this.

It also seems like it sorta can’t decide between being erotica … and actually having a plot. It sorta waffles … there’s what seems like a plot at first, then there really isn’t.

Dialogue flipped between witty and cheesy. It was entertaining enough while I worked, but I doubt I’ll read on in the series. Nothing really against it, per se, just very cliché and not very exciting and … the lazy writing doesn’t really do it for me.

If you like erotica, it might work for you, but the cheese factor was too high for me. Imagine being in the throes of passion and throwing out phrases like ‘heaving bosom’ or discussing your “tummy”.

Doesn’t really work for me, but each to her own.

2 stars.

Audio—
The narration was okay, smooth voices, good performance.