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A Strange Hymn (The Bargainer, #2)
Laura Thalassa
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I was selected to receive and ARC copy of this book, and I am so grateful!
I enjoyed the story, I thought the connection between the FMC and MMC was genuine and concrete. The side characters were fun, supportive and consistent. I’m not put off on reading the remainder of the series. That being said, this book needs major editing. It was to the point where the inconsistencies were pulling me out of the story. One moment the best friend, Indie, was living with her brother, the next she had two roommates. The situation with the old coach changed almost every time it was referenced (later explained, but confusing in the moment) and I’m pretty sure Alex’s dad was referred to as winning super bowls and then he was later changed to a hockey star. There were some grammatical errors, but those are to be expected in ARC’s and no points were taken off because of it. The overall baseline was good, I would just like to see a little bit more of cleanup job.
TW: sexual harassment/assault to a minor, slight stalker tendencies, slight graphic violence
🌶️ spice level (as always this is subjective)
Brothers best friend/off limits little sister/age gap
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