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the author should be using such vivid descriptions more sporadically imo, it just gets a little too much
ALSO, if you're using non-english words [and entire sentences] it should be the ones that have no direct translations (like honorifics or interjections or nicknames). if you're translating right after, might as well just write in english. this is a book aiming for an international audience after all. it gets tiring fast.
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the author should be using such vivid descriptions more sporadically imo, it just gets a little too much
ALSO, if you're using non-english words [and entire sentences] it should be the ones that have no direct translations (like honorifics or interjections or nicknames). if you're translating right after, might as well just write in english. this is a book aiming for an international audience after all. it gets tiring fast.
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