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This story reads as one of the comforting scenarios I imagine to fall asleep at night.
The writing wasn't great overall, and it definitely needed editing. There are typos and repetitions, some bits are unnecessary, but what made me truly struggle to make sense of the sentences some times was the lack of commas <\3. Also it tends to over-explain the characters' feelings and motives, instead of just showing them, which is something I don't love.
BUT. The story was cute. My fellow men who have passed through the accomplishments to become gentlemen experiencing companionship, love and comfort. Good. 🏳️⚧️
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I don't know if it's me, but from the very first page the writing feels a little wonky, example:
"He had thanked them with an appropriate amount of grace and modestly of course but internally he'd give himself a hearty pat on the back."
It doesn't flow well at all, maybe there's a typo and it was supposed to be "modesty" ? but also. We need more commas sir
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I loved this so much. Shut up John
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