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oatmilkabh

she/her • writer by day, bibliophile by night

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Dungeon Crawler Carl (Dungeon Crawler Carl, #1)
84, Charing Cross Road
One Last Stop
Pride and Prejudice
The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks
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When We Walk By: Forgotten Humanity, Broken Systems, and the Role We Can Each Play in Ending Homelessness in America
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    Tbh I’m not sure this is off to a good start considering the exposition dumping in the first few pages of the book combined with every other description being two redundant/unnecessary adjectives (i.e. “my thumping heartbeat” or “my spiking nerves”) or just overly flowery. I’m also noticing a lot of telling rather than showing…..

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  • Iron Widow (Iron Widow, #1)
    oatmilkabh
    May 04, 2026
    1.5
    Enjoyment: 1.5Quality: 1.0Characters: 0.5Plot: 1.0

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    Tbh I’m not sure this is off to a good start considering the exposition dumping in the first few pages of the book combined with every other description being two redundant/unnecessary adjectives (i.e. “my thumping heartbeat” or “my spiking nerves”) or just overly flowery. I’m also noticing a lot of telling rather than showing…..

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    Apr 23, 2026
    2.5
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