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Tbh I’m not sure this is off to a good start considering the exposition dumping in the first few pages of the book combined with every other description being two redundant/unnecessary adjectives (i.e. “my thumping heartbeat” or “my spiking nerves”) or just overly flowery. I’m also noticing a lot of telling rather than showing…..
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