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My Taste
L'Ordine della spada (Black Friars, #1)
L'imprevedibile piano della scrittrice senza nome
Written (The Librarian's Coven, #1)
Lola & the Millionaires: Part One
Lyndon. Come il mare sotto la luna
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Il libro della letteratura
6%
Taste (Feed and Feast, #2)
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Indie Microblogging
1%
Mads: Vol. 1 A Cash City Omegaverse Story
11%
The Apothecary Diaries (Light Novel): Volume 3
76%
Una stanza tutta per sé
60%
Cose spiegate bene. A proposito di libri
64%
Unnatural (The Wrong Alpha, #1)
56%

sarawithbooks commented on a post from the Pagebound Club forum

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  • In need of writing advice for improving my prose

    So I have recently started working on a fantasy novel, and I've come to realize that my prose is absolute trash compared to what I like to read. It's bland, bare-bones, one-note, and clunky. I'm constantly at a loss for words, and everything I write is lackluster in some way. It's very frustrating. I feel like my writing is at a 6th-grade level.

    I read almost exclusively in English—a wide variety of genres, and have done so for the past 10 years or so—but it's not my native language. I'm really frustrated because I used to be decent at writing in Farsi—at least I didn't have to think about grammar and vocabulary—but now it's as if I'm recovering from a stroke. I can't write at all in either language it seems.

    Do you have any tips for me on how I can improve my writing? Or how not to get pissed off at myself after struggling for an entire afternoon to write a simple hike-through-the-forest scene?

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    Claimed by the Alien

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    sarawithbooks commented on a post from the Pagebound Club forum

    3w
  • wattpad/ao3

    did all of us readers have our wattpad/ ao3 era?? and did it all start at like 10-12 bcz i feel like we are all living the same life over here😪

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    Il libro della letteratura

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    James Canton

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    Bro and the Beast 4 (The Wolf's Mate, #4)

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    L.C. Davis

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    Bro and the Beast 3 (The Wolf's Mate, #3)

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    The Good Boys Club (Mythical Mishaps #2)

    The Good Boys Club (Mythical Mishaps #2)

    Jemma Croft

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