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I’ll be upfront: my enjoyment of Ridley Walker got worse the longer it went on, and yes, it was the made-up language, which is probably the main reason you’ve heard of this book, that was a massive detriment to its longevity and readability.
The novel is a post-apocalyptic story set roughly 2,000 years after a nuclear war wiped out most of civilization. The remnants of humanity are left to pick up the pieces in a world that feels like the future from Terminator. Everything is decrepit, broken down, and roving packs of dogs attack anyone trying to survive day by day. Ridley Walker is a "connexion man," a kind of communicator and history keeper for a forgotten era. At the start, his father dies, and Ridley must take up the role.
The language is front and center from page one, it’s a devolved version of English, stripped of most grammar and crammed with mashed-together words. It’s gimmicky at first, but it doesn’t take long to figure out. By the third chapter, you’re breathing through it just fine. Mixed in are modern terms like "nuclear bomb" and "computer," but since the characters don’t know what those are, they’ve been reimagined as myth and legend.
I'm sorry to say this about a classic, but I wasn’t impressed. The language starts off as simple phonetic spellings, but by the fifth or sixth chapter, it just sounds like Jamaican Patois, or, worse, Jar Jar Binks.
The real problem is that this gimmick drags everything out as long as humanly possible. If a character needs to ask, “What are we gonna do to protect ourselves from the other gangs?” it becomes a multi-page slog that reads like five-year-olds mumbling at each other. Nothing gets accomplished. I kept waiting for a larger plot to unfold, but around Chapter 6, I hit a wall. I didn’t even want to read it anymore. Rather than sitting down for an hour, I could only take it in ten-minute bursts before getting bored and putting it down. It was impossible to build momentum.
There was still a story in there somewhere, but the language hampered it so much that the plot never got off the ground. It never found third or fourth gear. Any large action sequence felt kneecapped and all over the place, requiring multiple paragraph re-reads. Your experience may be completely different, but I could not get into this book.
I appreciate the effort, and I can see how this inspired Mad Max. Still, the language doesn’t lend itself to visual storytelling, especially in a book that has so much visual richness to offer.
Should it be on your TBR? If you’re a big sci-fi or dystopian lit fan, sure. But my enjoyment was severely hampered.
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Nights Master is some of the best modern fairytales with demons, elves, long forgotten times, magic, talismans, etc. I’ve ever read.
The book is a set of fairytales mostly circling around the demon Azhrarn who lives in the Underearth. It is a time when the Earth is flat and the Gods have forgotten about, or downright regret, humanity and Azhrarn has free reign over Earth. The tales twist and morph with humans starting as victims and then becoming talking demons themselves, enacting revenge or showing compassion, like an Aeon Flux cartoon following a never ending line of killers. The imagery is vivid and never ending. Every river is laden with metal, every forest glowing, the sun sets and rises at the whims of curses, you could flip open to any random page and find a vista worthy of a Peter Jackson treatment.
It would take spoiler-laden paragraphs to explain all the characters at the center of these tales but it is never boring, it is always moving, as I said villains become heroes and back to villains again, and in the final third when I had that worry it was losing steam the status quo of the world gets flipped upside down and everything changes. The deepest philosophical creations happen in the final fifty pages that bring ideas themselves into existence and left me craving for more.
Reading it I kept thinking “these would be great Wishbone episodes”. It is horrifying, horny, captivating, wonderous, evil, serene, epic,Nights Master delivers it all. Massive recommendation.
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Chamberlain's recounting of his years as a dragoon and then bounty hunter in the 1850's Southwest is a mad fish hole film reel of Hell on Earth. It is every bit was foreign and demonic as any fantasy novel. Living demons marching across the barren, burning hot landscape in search of women, whiskey, meat, and work and work usually meant murder for hire.
The first 2/3rds of the book is very straight forward, somewhat uneventful, and reads as any military record might. The prose is some of the best I've ever read and it is easy to pretend this is another Cormac McCarthy novel. His description of the scenery, the desert lands, the mountains, the rivers, the sunsets, are engrossing and breathtaking but it is the final third, the recounting of his time with the Glanton gang that formed the plotline for Blood Meridian, that is the main event.
I hate to sound naive but I was blown away at how much of Blood Meridian came from this book because it made the blood-soaked pages that much realer.
Eating donkeys, murdering fallen comrades out of pity, raids and battles leaving dozens dead, and the ghost of Judge Holden, pederast and all, standing over Chamberlain like the grim reaper pulling the strings of his army of heretics.
This journal is shocking and beautiful and reads better than any Western. Highly recommend.
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