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At this point I’m going to start ignoring all the colors that are said in this book cause they throw me out of it so quickly 😭
“the bleached blue-white of the sky near the sun, the deeper blue of the sky near the horizon, the slate blue of the clouds, the black-blue and green-blue and fathomless blue of the sea, all contrasted against the pale sand of the shore, the bright colors of the houses, and the dark green of the trees.”
“sprinkle of magenta freckles had developed across the bridge of her nose.”
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It’s kind of putting me in a reading slump… May pause and come back to it if it doesn’t catch my attention by 25%
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It’s kind of putting me in a reading slump… May pause and come back to it if it doesn’t catch my attention by 25%
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Everything I’ve seen in passing about this book… and nobodies ever mentioned that she’s Blue???
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I know I’m only on page 3; how much could I possibly be able to tell about the pacing? (did I use that semicolon correctly? lol). But idk, it’s just feeling a little off to me? I think a big part of it is the urgency of the situation vs how it’s written.
When Caz informs Kiela about Kinney Hall being broken into and ransacked her reaction is: “Goodness!”. I’m not gonna lie, I thought she had said that sarcastically, but then the next two paragraphs made me realize that she was, actually and truly, shocked.
Then, when she learns her library has been caught on fire, I’m getting no sense of urgency. She “got to her feet” and “went for a second armload”. I feel like even just using different verbs would help give a sense of urgency and tension? Like why doesn’t she “leap to her feet” or “run back for a second armload, almost colliding with Caz in her panic”?? I’m not saying those are better, but just something along those lines. Having neutral, non-urgent verbiage is not helping me feel the tension I’m lacking here.
Despite being in Kiela’s anxiety-ridden thoughts and understanding that she’s feeling horror at the books about to be lost, I wasn’t feeling any of that myself. I wasn’t feeling the urge to flip from one page to the next, worried about what was going to happen, needing to read on. I can’t pinpoint to what exactly it is in the writing that’s keeping me from feeling the urgency, but it’s just strange that I’m not, because normally I would be 🤔
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Maybe it’s because I don’t read much fantasy but I feel like this is going so slowly 😓😓😓 Right now the MC is a very isolated person and only ever talks about not wanting to see anyone or only caring about books/libraries which feels kind of selfish; however, I am going to assume that this is a trait that will be worked on with the townsfolk showing her a community that the isolating city didn’t I’ll keep reading but I’m unsure I am a huge cozy fantasy person… I did enjoy the Emily Wilde series (read 1 and 2) though so hopefully this is just because I haven’t read fantasy in a while!
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There seems to be kind of a lot of redundancy in the writing but it hasn’t bothered me…yet 🤪
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Maybe it’s because I don’t read much fantasy but I feel like this is going so slowly 😓😓😓 Right now the MC is a very isolated person and only ever talks about not wanting to see anyone or only caring about books/libraries which feels kind of selfish; however, I am going to assume that this is a trait that will be worked on with the townsfolk showing her a community that the isolating city didn’t I’ll keep reading but I’m unsure I am a huge cozy fantasy person… I did enjoy the Emily Wilde series (read 1 and 2) though so hopefully this is just because I haven’t read fantasy in a while!
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