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I would absolutely love to see this with revised naming conventions and proper editing
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Book of Night (Book of Night, #1)
Holly Black
loquat commented on loquat's review of Harriet Tubman: Live in Concert
The premise was fascinating, however I simply could not get into it. Not far in and I was left constantly feeling dragged out of the storyline and into the narrator's head. Which—no offense—I'm not here for you I'm here for Harriet (and the Returned).
I can understand writing such important historical figures in such a content must be challenging in more ways than one... but without getting far I found that the characters seem contradictory. Familiar with certain things, yet amazed by something mundane they seemingly would have tried by now having made it to such a stage (pun intended)/this far.
I suppose the audio book might have provided things the pages could not, but I'm not typically one to tandem read often.
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7% I'm not finishing this when I can't even get one page without getting stuck on some pronunciation, hearing the word fiann or whatever instead of soldier/warrior, or trying to edit-read to somehow better the flow of the book because it insists on repeating their full name again like it's scared I'll forget so it figures shoving it down my throat for the third time will somehow make me not irritated when I can't even pronounce it and I don't want to check the glossary (again) (not that it helps but sure, i need to be told what Samhain is...thanks).
The reviews of others only confirmed my exact irritations would persist throughout, and honestly one mentioned AI and I can't unthink it especially after the reapeated full names and quite honestly odd and already uncharactaristic behavior (you present the main character one way and yet somehow shes already...well, not representative of the person she describes of her self/life/thoughts.
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A Feather So Black (Fair Folk, #1)
Lyra Selene
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Quicksilver (Fae & Alchemy, #1)
Callie Hart
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The Cruel Prince (The Folk of the Air, #1)
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loquat commented on book_banshee's review of Malice (Malice Duology, #1)
There were some fun moments but this should’ve been a standalone story independent of the sleeping beauty myth. The attempts at tying this story into the myth got really convoluted. The plot didn’t flow well, I didn’t like the miscommunication trope, and there was some repetition that seriously got on my nerves. I swear the protagonist said “dragons teeth!” (Aka this world’s version of “damn it!”) every other page and it KILLED ME. Also, the identity of the traitor was so obvious. Overall it just felt kind of immature.
loquat commented on CKjaerL's review of Malice (Malice Duology, #1)
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loquat commented on ines.epub's review of Malice (Malice Duology, #1)
You can tell that I actually went into this with a positive mindset because I purchased a physical copy. Unfortunately I seem to be in the minority with my dislike of this book.
The worldbuilding in Malice was alright, but the real problem here is style and character motivation. Heather Walter will jump from regular speech to trying to sound noble and royal, even making an attempt at pretty and descriptive prose in unbecoming moments. The ways in which characters talk to each other will suddenly change with no context to justify it. I'm surprised that no editor picked up on this.
The politics in the world of Briar also make little sense. Everyone is some kind of evil extremist with the exception of the main characters who either want to ignore the politics that oppress them or want change without any bloodshed. I think that as readers we should be able to expect a far more complicated and nuanced portrayal of political intrigue from an adult, or at least intended for older audiences since sex, while not extremely graphic, is present in this book, book.
None of the characters in this book make any sense. Alyce doesn't know what she wants (to stay in Briar, to leave it, does Aurora love her, does she not?), is incredibly naive see: Kal, a character who served no real overarching purpose in Alyce's character development and both her and Aurora don't seem to have enough braincells or spine to actually put their plans into action.
What could have been a wonderful queer debut turned out to be something full of flaws that can't be overlooked, but could have been edited out if Heather Walter and her editor actually sat down and had a conversation about the characters. Might purchase the sequel to see if anything's improved (doesn't seem that way from the snippet included at the end of Malice), but that'll be strictly digital and on sale.
loquat wrote a review...
Overall I had a fun time reading this and plan to read the second, especially since it's only a duology.
That being said, there are inconsistencies riddled throughout and the character all feel so easily thrown away. The author holds your hand and tells you how she wants you to feel about the characters, while they seem to provide very little meaning or growth to each other along the way. With the exception of Alyce's training (like and ends at the prowess/manifestations of and nothing more).
A blaring issue—you can't have it both ways—this is based on true love or it isn't. I understand I haven't made it through the second book, but as it stands you canonically have a man 30 years a senior to an 8 year old breaking a curse—there are hints of true love not being what it seems but that all seems but squandered when you get into Aurora's speculations...so what was the point in including that disgusting and in the end entirely (this far) meaningless piece?
Naming someone Rose felt weird and put down the fucking Dragons Teeth you suddenly picked up randomly along the way.
loquat wrote a review...
The premise was fascinating, however I simply could not get into it. Not far in and I was left constantly feeling dragged out of the storyline and into the narrator's head. Which—no offense—I'm not here for you I'm here for Harriet (and the Returned).
I can understand writing such important historical figures in such a content must be challenging in more ways than one... but without getting far I found that the characters seem contradictory. Familiar with certain things, yet amazed by something mundane they seemingly would have tried by now having made it to such a stage (pun intended)/this far.
I suppose the audio book might have provided things the pages could not, but I'm not typically one to tandem read often.
Post from the A Feather So Black (Fair Folk, #1) forum
5% I have to be honest, the inclusion of Gaelic based naming conventions is fun but is already getting old.
I feel its being shoehorned in. Using it for places and names is one thing and helps build the world...but using a foreign word frequently and using variations of it (ex. fiann) in place of something already familiar (ex. warrior) constantly brings me out of the story (and the variations just complicate that more).
Im already working for all these unfamiliar pronunciations, many of which are already left out of the Glossary so this just feels unnecessary.
I also don't need someones full name or title repeatedly for much the same reasons.
I'm still interested in the story so far besides that, but it's awfully hard to really get into a flow of reading when I'm constantly second guessing a pronunciation or reminding myself what a word means, or guessing it's new variarions exact meaning/inference/hierarchy.
7% Update: I read a little further. Not much. It's genuinely disconnecting having so many foreign words and names thrown at you right in the begninning in the middle of building the setting while we haven't even really gotten to know the characters (or have we already figured them out...?)
I also, unfortunately, can not read Rogan without thinking Joe which is unfortunate but something I could have probably entirely forgotten about had I been given a chance to reach any sort of flow reading without getting dragged right out by another foreign name/word/variation (a lot of which were again...not in the glossary which I was so very excited to see before I even read anything).
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Harriet Tubman: Live in Concert
Bob the Drag Queen
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A Feather So Black (Fair Folk, #1)
Lyra Selene
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Misrule (Malice Duology, #2)
Heather Walter