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respectfully did this not get seen by an editor before being published why is every sentence an entire paragraph with 500 commas in it 😭
edit to add: mariá’s chapters seem fine, but alice’s are a mess. i understand it may have been an intentional decision to reflect her character and her anxiety etc etc but it is… excessive. i feel mentally out of breath after each sentence (which again i realise may be intentional! abd could be good! if it wasnt every sentence!)
Post from the Bury Our Bones in the Midnight Soil forum
respectfully did this not get seen by an editor before being published why is every sentence an entire paragraph with 500 commas in it 😭
edit to add: mariá’s chapters seem fine, but alice’s are a mess. i understand it may have been an intentional decision to reflect her character and her anxiety etc etc but it is… excessive. i feel mentally out of breath after each sentence (which again i realise may be intentional! abd could be good! if it wasnt every sentence!)
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