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āKerosene,ā he said, because the silence had lengthened, āis nothing but perfume to me.ā
āDoes it seem like that, really.ā
āOf course. Why not?ā
Oh, this Montag guy is so lost in the sauce working for the government. He lowkey sounds like a massive pyromaniac.
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āKerosene,ā he said, because the silence had lengthened, āis nothing but perfume to me.ā
āDoes it seem like that, really.ā
āOf course. Why not?ā
Oh, this Montag guy is so lost in the sauce working for the government. He lowkey sounds like a massive pyromaniac.
Post from the Fahrenheit 451 forum
Iām finally getting the chance to read this book because of the current events happening in our government and the education system in the US failing me once more. Honestly surprised I havenāt read this book in high schoolā¦
Also, I must admit that I dislike saying this, considering the controversies surrounding the man, but Neil Gaimanās introduction was quite good. Okay, Iāve finally gotten that off my chest.
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Fahrenheit 451
Ray Bradbury
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Do not hate me for saying this, but I donāt entirely get the hype for this book. Just a disclaimer: Iām not the biggest romance reader, but I always like to give any genre a chance. And while the author handled the surprise pregnancy trope better than most, weaving it into the charactersā growth rather than using it as cheap drama, this book just wasnāt for me.
What worked for me was how emotionally vulnerable and honest the story becomes with both Win and Bo. The author does a good job showing how their past insecurities, disabilities, and fears shape who they are. You really feel Winās struggle between fierce independence and needing support, and Boās journey toward trust and self-acceptance is genuinely sweet. There are thoughtful moments of emotional growth that show rather than tell how these two people learn to lean on one another rather than hide behind walls.
But I had several gripes with how the story was told. For one, thereās very little external conflict or plot momentum. Aside from them navigating the pregnancy and slowly building emotional intimacy, nothing truly drives the story forward, and at times it feels like a series of pleasant moments rather than a narrative with stakes. Iāve seen other reviewers point out that the pacing is slow and a bit meandering, especially because a lot of the focus is on introspection and character quirks rather than real tension.
The writing style itself also didnāt quite click for me. It wasnāt bad exactly. Just simple and, at times, a little juvenile (more prevalent in the initial chapters). Some of the monologues felt, to be frank, very corny, and I never got the sense that the prose was evolving as the story went on. It reads like an early work from an author still refining their voice rather than polished, confident writing.
Another sticking point was how Bo is written. Yes, he is a massive green flag male romantic partner, and many readers adore him form the reviews Iāve read. Heās patient, supportive, and emotionally intelligent. However, he feels almost too perfect, like heās more often than not there to provide solutions to every one of Winās concerns rather than being his own fully realized person (besides his complicated backstory between his ex-fiancĆ© and motherās death). It made some of their interactions feel unrealistic that doesnāt entirely allow him to be a complex counterpart in his own right.
Overall, I understand why so many readers fell in love with this book. Its quiet warmth, healthy communication, and gentle chemistry are undeniably charming, and made me realize that the possibility of such a romance is there for me. However, it didnāt go far enough into conflict or emotional complexity and thatās what I mostly desired in a romance novel.
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Out on a Limb
Hannah Bonam-Young
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The sharing one bed trope! The love confession was filled with innocent intimacy! The āI love you.ā Fuck yeah, romance is back on the menu for me, baby!!!
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Solid 3 stars š
For a short manga, The Two Lions felt plain and predictable for my liking. It follows a familiar formula of soft, light, fuzzy BL romances, but easily lost among dozens of similar stories Iāve read. Just to clarify, there is nothing inherently wrong with that, but it never quite distinguishes itself enough to feel as memorable for my personal taste.
What I did appreciate was the foundation of Junpei and Onizukaās relationship. Their friendship comes first, which gives the eventual romance something grounded and personal rather than forced. Felt pretty realistic to how many relationships are formed. You can genuinely feel their comfort with each other, and the chemistry between them builds naturally. That slow burn romance between a sunshine x grumpy dynamic is easily the strongest part of the book (and dare say, my kryptonite???).
Where the story falters is in the pacing. For such a short volume, it meanders in scenes and conversations that donāt add depth or move the plot forward. We get very little insight into their backgrounds beyond just seeing events regarding Onizukaās high school past. Side characters drift in and out without much purpose, mostly serving as background noise or teasing minor relationship drama. The only one who feels meaningful is Onizukaās grandfather and the homeless man, both influential figures in shaping who Onizuka is.
The romance itself also feels underdeveloped in places. Junpeiās realization that he āsuddenly likes guysā comes late and with insufficient internal reflection (except for emotionally distancing). The story is also surprisingly restrained with actual intimacy. Thereās only one real moment of physical affection, a kiss (mind you, it was censored), and it doesnāt even occur in the main narrative but in a bonus chapter after the story has already ended.
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The Two Lions
Nagisa Furuya
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The Two Lions
Nagisa Furuya