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Hello everyone! I'm new to pagebound, so here I am creating my first post! What better way of doing it by getting to know you!
What matters more to you: beautiful writing, a great plot, or unforgettable characters?
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Hello everyone! I'm new to pagebound, so here I am creating my first post! What better way of doing it by getting to know you!
What matters more to you: beautiful writing, a great plot, or unforgettable characters?
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Dawn of the North (The Ashen, #3)
Demi Winters
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Heat of the Everflame
Penn Cole
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Rites of the Starling
Devney Perry
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Well, color me surprised—the second book was actually a big step up from the first. The plot finally felt like it knew where it was going instead of wandering around hoping to stumble across a destination. The writing was smoother, the pacing was better, and the story kept my attention much more than the first book.
There were a few scenes that genuinely had me laughing out loud, which I wasn't expecting and really enjoyed. The MMC finally felt like a fully realized character instead of just existing to move the plot along. The FMC, however, still felt a little underdeveloped. She wasn't terrible, but compared to the MMC, she was missing that extra depth that would've made her more memorable.
Overall, this was a much more enjoyable read. If the author keeps improving at this rate, I'm actually looking forward to picking up the next book to see where this series goes.
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This book was just... okay.
The writing felt amateur at times, and the story never really developed a strong plot. It reminded me more of a sitcom—something you put on in the background to pass the time rather than something that fully captures your attention. The characters didn't have much depth, making it hard to become invested in them.
That said, it was entertaining enough as a palate cleanser between heavier reads. It was easy to get through, but it wasn't memorable. Overall, it's not a book I regret reading, but it's also not one I'd ever pick up again or recommend enthusiastically.
Will I read the next book? Against my better judgment... probably. This one felt like the literary equivalent of having a sitcom on while you're folding laundry, but now I need to know if the plot ever decides to show up. Here's hoping book two gives the characters a personality and me a reason to care.
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