
she/her | reader, writer | 20+ | 🩷🧡🤍 | My most-read genres are Fantasy and Sci-Fi, but I am getting more into Horror and Litfic!
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For me it's, "I immediately like them." I have never liked someone after they said two sentences to me, and this is almost always used on an extremely minor and/or annoying character.
Another is "But (this person/the government/the cult I've been indoctrinated into since birth) wouldn't (lie to me/be wrong) ... right?" ESPECIALLY if it is early in the book or the character is still supposed to be deep in their denial or indoctrination. It feels so lazy, like the author doesn't know how to actually write that transition.

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Marisa Kashino
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I could make her worse