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Does anyone also regret that the editing is kinda lacking? I feel like this book could have been exceptional, had the author been pushed to enrich her vocabulary and work a bit more on her descriptions. I've also spotted a few mistakes (inconsistent names). The story was thrilling and I liked the modernity of some of the scenes (iykyk), but I cannot help but feel that this errs more on the side of twilight/divergent than Eragon in terms of writing quality.
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Does anyone also regret that the editing is kinda lacking? I feel like this book could have been exceptional, had the author been pushed to enrich her vocabulary and work a bit more on her descriptions. I've also spotted a few mistakes (inconsistent names). The story was thrilling and I liked the modernity of some of the scenes (iykyk), but I cannot help but feel that this errs more on the side of twilight/divergent than Eragon in terms of writing quality.
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The idea was nice, the execution however... Boring, not credible, failing at depicting the trans character respectfully.
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