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  • Fourth Wing (The Empyrean, #1)
    Just finished it and have some thoughts

    Does anyone also regret that the editing is kinda lacking? I feel like this book could have been exceptional, had the author been pushed to enrich her vocabulary and work a bit more on her descriptions. I've also spotted a few mistakes (inconsistent names). The story was thrilling and I liked the modernity of some of the scenes (iykyk), but I cannot help but feel that this errs more on the side of twilight/divergent than Eragon in terms of writing quality.

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  • Fourth Wing (The Empyrean, #1)
    Just finished it and have some thoughts

    Does anyone also regret that the editing is kinda lacking? I feel like this book could have been exceptional, had the author been pushed to enrich her vocabulary and work a bit more on her descriptions. I've also spotted a few mistakes (inconsistent names). The story was thrilling and I liked the modernity of some of the scenes (iykyk), but I cannot help but feel that this errs more on the side of twilight/divergent than Eragon in terms of writing quality.

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  • Scattered All Over the Earth
    pelbu
    Jul 11, 2025
    1.0
    Enjoyment: Quality: Characters: Plot:

    The idea was nice, the execution however... Boring, not credible, failing at depicting the trans character respectfully.

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  • Counterfeit
    pelbu
    Jul 11, 2025
    2.0
    Enjoyment: 3.0Quality: 2.0Characters: 3.0Plot: 4.0

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  • The Song of Achilles
    pelbu
    Jul 11, 2025
    4.0
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