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I am heavily invested in this story and in the subtle romance so far! I can also see the heavy inspiration from Roy and Riza from Fullmetal Alchemist. It is quite clear within all the details, but Weston and Margaret still stand well as characters on their own.
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Does the spark between this two ignates sometime? The "rival to lovers" feels so forced. Both of them feel to me nore like friends with rivalry than potential lovers 😭. Also, the fact that Jack was abused by the whole town doesn't help at all. He's doing too much for his abusers. And that includes his "rival" (childhood bully/friend).
And the mystery of the girls and the secondary characters are a bit more interesting that the story of the romance. I'm sorry, but it feels like a check point in a list of "What a book of fantasy should contain".
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And what if loving someone is remembering them ? What is love if it’s not noticing someone in a crowded room, remembering and noticing every details of their face, body and mind. Maybe, loving someone is consuming them, discovering and being scared that the memory they created in our mind fade away.
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The Tainted Cup (Shadow of the Leviathan, #1)
Robert Jackson Bennett
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Fahrenheit 451 delivers a message that is only becoming increasingly relevant, and does so directly and concisely. Compared to 1984 and Brave New World, the scale of the dystopia feels smaller, like a house compared to an entire country, as it never strays too far from Guy's perspective and issues. Its messages are timeless, deserving of its status as a classic.
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Fahrenheit 451
Ray Bradbury