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    Critique of the Magical Language from 5% (chapter 2)

    This is the first time the magical language really appears. As a German, I find it both interesting and a bit strange. The family in the book is supposed to have German ancestors, but their magical language isn’t fully German—it’s kind of German, but with grammar mistakes and misspelt words (and it's not old German either!)

    Most of the time, you can understand what the words are supposed to mean, but it pulls me out of the story a bit. I get that fantasy magic languages are a thing, and I understand why authors base them on real languages. But here’s the thing: if this was supposed to be a fantasy magic language, it really didn’t need to be so close to German. Honestly, when you say these words out loud in German, they just sound… off. It sounds strange to anyone who actually knows German. I’m not sure how it comes across to someone who doesn’t speak German, but for me, it just sounds weird.

    Especially the words that are spelt correctly but are grammatically wrong—it just sounds wrong. I would have preferred if the words were more freely invented and only loosely inspired by German. Instead, it’s actually German, just… wrong German. And that pulls me out of the story a bit. I don’t really understand why the author chose to do it this way.

    Here are some examples:

    • Wachst auf. Wachst auf – This is supposed to mean wake up (German: wach auf). Grammatically, wachst auf is incorrect because wachst is the second person singular present form of wachen in German, which doesn’t make sense here.
    • bisch da / bisch unter lebenden – This would be you are here / among the living in English. Bisch is a distorted form of bist (you are). Unter Lebenden should be unter den Lebenden to be grammatically correct.
    • bisch wiff / bisch wusch / bisch starchbisch = bist (you are). Starch = stark (strong). I’m not sure about wiff and wusch, but they seem like invented words inspired by German sounds (I would have preferred all the words to be like this!)
    • fiir und wasserfire and water (Feuer und Wasser in German). Fiir is misspelt, Wasser is correct.
    • äther und Ëërdeether and earth (Äther und Erde). The E with the two dots doesn’t exist in German; it’s a stylisation (We have letters with dots, but not the E)

    Overall, it’s an interesting idea, but as a German speaker, it just sounds awkward and sometimes pulls me out of the story. The grammar mistakes in otherwise correct German words make it especially strange.

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    Welcome to the Quest! 🏡⚔️🫶🏽 (drop your recs here)

    Hey everyone! ✨I’m helli (she/her) and the creator of this Quest!

    I’m so excited that you’ve joined the Found Family in Fantasy Quest! 🏡 I really wanted to create a list that celebrates diversity across fantasy subgenres — from cozy fantasy, urban fantasy, epic and high fantasy, to darker, moodier tales. I hope there is something here for everyone, no matter your taste.

    I also tried my best to include authors from a variety of backgrounds — gender, ethnicity, country — and diverse characters as well. Representation matters! Of course, I haven’t read everything yet, so this list is just the start. I’m really looking forward to discovering more books by diverse authors with diverse characters through your recommendations.

    Another thing I focus on is diversifying the found family itself. Not every found family looks the same — some are wholesome and functional, some are messy or even dysfunctional, just like biological families. Some stories might include romance, but that’s usually a background element, not the main focus. What’s most important is that chosen family and the bonds they form are central, and those bonds don’t always have to be positive or easy.

    I already have quite a few books lined up to add over time, but I’d love to hear your recommendations! 🌟 If you’ve read something that fits the “found family” vibe — a group of misfits, outcasts, or strangers who become chosen family — please drop your recs in the comments under this post.

    I’ve purposely started with 31 books. This was intentional — I have many more lined up for the future, but I wanted to start with a manageable number so I can thoughtfully consider any recommendations you give. I’ll regularly add new books to the Quest, and I’m excited to see your suggestions!

    Let’s make this Quest a space to share and discover magical worlds where home is found, not given, and to celebrate all the amazing, diverse voices in fantasy. I can’t wait to see all your suggestions and discuss these books with you! 🫶🏽

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    I truly love this story, however I was not expecting it so be a slow one. I am enjoying reading about the characters that weren’t in the movie.

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  • Welcome!

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