seema commented on curlyjeannine's review of Piranesi
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I'm reading the catalan translation and I'm a bit lost just at the beginning. The protagonist is talking with the keeper at the "morgue" where they have his mother's corpse. The nurse leaves. The keeper keeps talking, and suddenly his wife was telling him that the topics were not things to be said to the protagonist and he apologises, the protagonist telling him it's ok as he was interested. So... There was no woman there as the nurse left, so this wife... Where is she appearing from? I searched for an English translation but it's exactly the same: a disapproval from the keeper's wife that just appears from nowhere... Is the disapproval a memory from how his wife has reacted to his mention of the burial of corpses in the land?
This is such a stupid detail but now I can't take it off my mind š
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This matter-of-fact prose style in this translation is so pleasing to me. I don't like simple prose usually but I knew it could be done well. It is done very well here.
Post from the The Stranger forum
There's nothing I love more in a book than an author's note or translator's note, and I'm really pleasantly surprised to be finding it at the start of my edition instead of at the end where I've more commonly seen it. I feel like it is such a gift to get a peek into the "why" of the writing or translation, and this note in particular made me really reflect on the artistry of translation and what a labor of love it is to try to take one text and turn it into another. Words like "faithful" and "honest" and "thoughtful" come to mind as goals of this effort, and Ward digging into some choices he made to try to get it "right" (if such a thing is possible) just filled me with a lot of appreciation before I've even started reading. I also thought it was kind of funny - like was that a little dig at Gilbert's translation's "paraphrastic earnestness" I detected?
There's plenty of discussion in the forum already about the famous opening line and I've seen that discussion already includes some of what Ward mentioned in his note, so I won't rehash that. Instead, the part of the note I wanted to mention that I particularly liked and felt set my expectations well (and that others without a note at the start might enjoy) was from the very first paragraph of the note:
"The Stranger demanded of Camus the creation of a style at once literary and profoundly popular, an artistic sleight of hand that would make the complexities of a man's life appear simple. [...] What little Meursault says or feels or does resonates with all he does not say, all he does not feel, all he does not do. The "simplicity" of the text is merely apparent and everywhere paradoxical."
For lack of a proper literary way of saying this: that is just so delicious to me. It makes me so excited to sink my teeth into what sounds to be some really juicy negative space in this book.
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As I read I found myself really wishing I could hear some of the harp music, so I poked around to find some and ended up stumbling upon a playlist by the author on Spotify, š here
In an interview Ross says:
"I have a music playlist for A River Enchanted on my Spotify account. It includes songs I listened to while I was writing the book and that inspired certain scenes. The music, from beginning to end, charts the emotional arc of the book. I like to let readers know about it, in case they want to listen to the music before, during, or after they read."
So that's fun! I haven't listened to it all but I've popped around to a few songs. Thought others might be interested :) I'm also still curious to find one specific to harps, basically like what Jack plays at different points (keeping it spoiler free, haha) to be able to kind of immerse better!
Post from the A River Enchanted (Elements of Cadence, #1) forum
As I read I found myself really wishing I could hear some of the harp music, so I poked around to find some and ended up stumbling upon a playlist by the author on Spotify, š here
In an interview Ross says:
"I have a music playlist for A River Enchanted on my Spotify account. It includes songs I listened to while I was writing the book and that inspired certain scenes. The music, from beginning to end, charts the emotional arc of the book. I like to let readers know about it, in case they want to listen to the music before, during, or after they read."
So that's fun! I haven't listened to it all but I've popped around to a few songs. Thought others might be interested :) I'm also still curious to find one specific to harps, basically like what Jack plays at different points (keeping it spoiler free, haha) to be able to kind of immerse better!
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"I slipped into the pizza place and waited in line to order. After paying my seventy-five cents, I walked out with a cheese slice snug in a triangular cardboard box."
75 cent slice had me stopping in my tracks š girl today that'd just cover the fee for the box you're carrying it in š
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seema commented on seema's review of The Lion Women of Tehran
Struggled a lot with how to rate and review this. I enjoyed the story and was certainly emotionally moved by it, especially as a child of immigrants, as a woman, and as someone desperately hopeful for a better tomorrow. There were many chapters and arcs I was totally gripped by (though some others less so), and I think the story is overall an important one that many in the US could benefit from reading to walk a fictional mile in the shoes of Iranian women.
However, the writing continuously frustrated me. The story spans nearly a full lifetime, and early chapters continuously pulled me out of the text with a clumsy straddling of multiple time periods: the story was from an immature MC with a highly limited perspective appropriate for a child, yet the language and observations of an adult, and peppered throughout were also moments of omniscient narration offering retrospective commentary and editorialization. Once we got into adult years a lot of that friction disappeared, but all the way through the text chapters were continuously ending with allusions to the future meant to manufacture suspense. I can understand a couple of these in the beginning to set the tone and get the reader interested, but to have the same "dun dun dunnn" about the exact same thing all the way to 75% made me feel like the author just didn't trust the reader to still be interested on their own. Frankly, it annoyed me, and ultimately had the opposite effect of breaking my immersion into the story of the book by reminding me time and time again that I was reading words written by an author.
I guess all in all I'm satisfied that I read it, and may even think of the story and some poignant moments and messages again, but I know this author is not one I'm likely to pick up again.
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I want to read more cozy fantasy next month. Also, I realized I started a lot of the books here when I had GR but idk...I forgot about them. Is there a thing as a DNF because you got preoccupied with life and other books that you forgot to finish a book or four š¤£
Anyway, I am excited! I hope I achieve my goal.
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