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Hi sweet friends, I wanted to come in here and chat a little bit about what actually draws us to cozy fantasy. Not as a debate on definition (because we've sure had plenty of those), but more to understand what pulled us into this little group here and has kept us here since. Maybe we can even get to know each other a bit and build a better sense of community while we are at it 🩷
So, to share a bit personally here, recently I've been having something like a crisis of faith about this genre, which I once loved so much (enough to make a quest!) but in the past few months just wasn't doing it at all for me. When I think back, I found cozy fantasy at a time in my life where I was very overwhelmed, when the world felt large and scary and unpredictable, and when these books offered me some hope and some calm. I read them for escapism and comfort. Thankfully, I was able to find much more steadiness and groundedness in my life, but that means the books snagging my interest have been offering a balance in the other direction: more problems, more adrenaline, more grey areas. In the spirit of transparency, I also got a bit down with seeing how much criticism several cozy fantasy books that have made their way to more of the mainstream got for being boring, shallow, sad, or on the flip side not cozy "enough." I admittedly started wondering if maybe these books only really hit in times of crisis? But I just finished reading A Psalm for the Wild-Built, and I feel like that book really reminded me that actually, these stories can be more than just a hug only when you need one. They can also be inspiring, and change your perspective, and just be really dang lovely to read for fun when you're already doing just fine. Maybe that's obvious, but I figured if as the quest owner I've had doubts and gone through different seasons with these books, surely some of y'all must have too? And maybe we can talk about that.
So, all that said, I'd love to hear: what prompts you to pick up a cozy fantasy book? What are you hoping to find within the pages? Do you need to be in a particular mood? Have you also gone through on and off seasons with it? Is there anything else you want to share that feels related?
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This is such a unique book, I was hooked from the first time loop.
Asher is such a god-tier down bad MMC, I mean, he changes the universe so he’s on the same side as Levi. He’s a menace with no shame and a malfunctioning moral compass (warnings included at the start of the book and appreciated) but he is Devoted to the extreme.
Levi is our POV main character and a delightfully refreshing change to standard horror movie/game protags. He is sensible and methodical in his approach to try and work things out about the world around him, and he is written so genuinely that when he does struggle with everything that’s happening, it’s emotionally raw and intense. My concerns about everything being streamed (which Levi doesn’t really bring up past the start?) are thankfully resolved closer to the end of the book.
And what an ending that was! So excited to see that there’s a sequel in the works.
Major kudos to the author for balancing the horror elements of the ‘gameplay’ alongside the romance. It felt so atmospheric and easy to visualise.
Thank you to the author and BookSirens for the ARC. I dropped everything to request this one so I am beyond delighted after reading it 💜
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Hi all 👋 I finished Parable of the Sower by Octavia E. Butler not that long ago and I found the diary format really incredible for a dystopian novel. Even with the words left unsaid, I found it easier to grasp what it all must have felt like for the main character. The reality of the situation.
Are there other dystopian novels out there that utilise letters/diaries/newspapers etc in the narrative? Any recommendations or thoughts on epistolary dystopian novels?
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I've been reading a book by Jeff Vandermeer that talks about a few different approaches to style. Here is how he defines the different approaches, with examples (textual and authors), and I thought it might be interesting to see what everyone here tends to gravitate to!
Sparse, understated prose that often relies on inference and suggestion. Use of detail is minimal but may be more powerful in isolation. Descriptions are rare and take on significance common to poetry. Poor execution leaves no purchase for the reader and induces boredom and sometimes contempt. Characterization relies in part on what's not said, or not expressed.
Example: "He walked out to the main road, turned, limped toward the main gates. A man was dead, murdered, or perhaps very much alive. Borchert was playing with him, and perhaps the others were as well. The night was cool, cloudless. Where was this place? He turned and looked back, saw the building he was staying in, the only light being that of his own room." -Brian Evenson, "The Brotherhood of Mutilation"
Representative Writers: Samuel Beckett, Raymond Carver, Brian Evenson, Ernest Hemingway, Amy Hempel
Transitional Writer: Carol Emshwiller
The "baseline" approach common to much fiction, especially in commercial modes, picks its spots with balance in scene/summary and judicious sue of sensory detail. Immersive reading is usually the goal. Few long sentences. Poor execution induces a reaction of "mediocrity."
Example: "Amy Fremont got up from the rocking chair, and came across the porch. She was a tall woman, thin, a smiling vacancy in her eyes. About a year ago, Anthony had gotten mad at her, because she'd told him he shouldn't have turned the cat into a cat-rug. Although he had always obeyed her more than anyone else, which was hardly at all, this time he'd snapped at her. With his mind. And that had been the end of Amy Fremont's bright eyes, and the end of Amy Fremont as everyone had known her." -"It's a Good Life," Jerome Bixby
Representative Writers: Octavia Butler, Daphne Du Maurier, Joe Haldeman, Mary Doria Russell, Karin Tidbeck, Kurt Vonnegut
Transitional Writer: Karen Joy Fowler
Sentence structures tend to be more complex and summary/half-scene is employed in a more layered way, with time perhaps more easily manipulated as a result. Character POVs may be differentiated as much by style as content. Ample use of extended metaphor and sensory detail. Poor execution induces a reaction of "too clever" or "lost the thread."
Example: "A moment I float beneath her, a starry shadow. Distant canyons where spectral lightning flashes: neurons firing as I tap into the heart of the poet, the dark core where desire and horror fuse and Morgan turns ever and again to stare out a bus window. The darkness clears. I taste for an instant the metal bile that signals the beginning of therapy, and then I'm gone." -Elizabeth Hand, "The Boy in the Tree"
Representative Writers: Martin Amis, Michael Cisco, Elizabeth Hand, Ursula K. Le Guin, Kelly Link, Joyce Carol Oates, Ben Okri
Transitional Writer: China Miéville
Word play, extended (sometimes raucous) metaphors, and self-conscious approaches may occur, with longer sentences and descriptive passages likely. The paragraphs exist to advance story and showcase the words. Characterization can occur through stylistic exaggeration. Poetic meter may be present. Reverie and hyperbole become more foregrounded. Poor execution induces a sense of thickness, "encrustedness," and a lack of emotional resonance.
Example: "Stilt-legs scissoring, snip-snap! the bird gods dance. Old craneycrows, a skulk of powers. How they strut and ogle with their long eyes, knowing. How they serpentine their necks. And stalking, how they flirt their tails, insouciant as Groucho. Fugue and counter-fugue, the music jigs and sneaks. On tiptoe, solemnly, they hop and flap; they whirl and whet their long curved clever bills." -Greer Gilman, "Down the Wall"
Representative Writers: K.J. Bishop, Angela Carter, Robert Coover, Rikki Ducornet, Jamaica Kincaid, Tanith Lee, Mervyn Peake, Salman Rushdie, Catherynne M. Valente
One thing that I also liked was how Vandermeer made a point to emphasize that just because a style is not lush/ornate, doesn't mean it isn't complex! Piranesi by Susanna Clarke and Mad Sisters of Esi by Tashan Mehta don't read the same as the example #4 paragraph above, but the writing is wrought with so much depth and intricacy that i feel like we can't call it anything other than "complex".
So my question is: which style do you find yourself reading the most? Does your preference change across genres or in long-form (novels) vs short-form fiction? (If you need some pointers on pinpointing styles, most commercial romance tends to be comfortably style #2. Most popular SFF ranges from #2-3.5, with more upmarket or literary titles trending #3-4 - I feel that #4 is rare in a modern SFF titles, but i'm happy to be proven wrong! And litfic seems to employ a wider variety of styles given the experimentation with language.)
I think my sweet spot tends to be around #2.5-4. I enjoy a very well-executed style #2 as well, i.e. Kurt Vonnegut's stuff is really fun to me! But I tend to get lost in the artistry and technical craft of the language as well as the actual story, plot, and characters - in fact, my fave books use all these elements in service of each other - so I will always appreciate a more ornate or experimental/complex approach to style if the author decides to take that risk!
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Hi all 👋 I finished Parable of the Sower by Octavia E. Butler not that long ago and I found the diary format really incredible for a dystopian novel. Even with the words left unsaid, I found it easier to grasp what it all must have felt like for the main character. The reality of the situation.
Are there other dystopian novels out there that utilise letters/diaries/newspapers etc in the narrative? Any recommendations or thoughts on epistolary dystopian novels?